I will incline mine ear to the parable, and shew my dark speech upon the harpfrom Psalm 49
I like this one, too.
Thanks. It has its weak spots, though. "As they needs must be" is filler. And fast food isn't really served on dishes, but I used "dish" anyway -- to complete the triple internal rhyme.I'm proud, though, of being one of the few poet(aster)s in Anglo-American history to use the words "piscivorous" and "yum" in the same sonnet!Having said all that, I think I like my 5th Dimension sonnet better.
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